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  • Writer: PAOLA ALVAREZ
    PAOLA ALVAREZ
  • Mar 28, 2023
  • 1 min read

video 1: I think the video had funky music and I thought it fit the message of the video well. I think that the video didn't have a story and no direction other than "it looks cool." This video didn't have much going on and had no effects.

video 2: I like the editing it was really smooth. I think the story was going somewhere, but could've been told better. I think it lacked putting everything together.

video 3: I like the editing and sound effects. I thought it was really silly but had no story. I think it was just really random.

video 8: The story was creative, the effects were good, everything was good. I think the story was the best thing. Everything was well done and entertaining.

video 7: I think the story was really interesting and entertaining, but at the very end didn't explain the end. I think the producer at the very end lost their purpose.

video 9: I love the editing and the voice. It seems like one of those movie recaps. I think that the voice could've been louder because at parts you couldn't hear.

video 10: I like the editing, but the story wasn't clear. I couldn't tell what was happening. Everything was random.

 
 
 

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